Persuasive Writing - Ella Marie

13 Years or Under Should not have Facebook!

WALT plan our ideas before we write and refer to this as we write. 
I truly believe children under 13 should not be allowed to have Facebook until they are older.

Facebook is full of bad and dangerous things. Strangers can manage to find private information about you. They could find when you were born or even maybe where you live. Maybe if you had younger siblings that had Facebook as well, there could be a chance this person will find even more information from them.

Facebook is filled with rude, horrible posts. Some posts may be things that your parents don't allow you to look at. Some people don't say nice things ,like swearing to you. A lot of people don't think straight and plan to do something bad. While other people are nice, but that still doesn't mean Facebook is alright for young children.     

Some people think they're allowed to break the rules. Children lie about their age if they are 13 and under. Some children block their parents from seeing their pages so their parents don't know about it. You could be in danger the minute you push sign in.

I'm 100% sure that children under the age of 13 should not have Facebook. Remember to never let your child on Facebook until they are 13.