Saturday, 24 February 2018

Bike Riding with Nan

Having a fun bike ride!

During the Christmas holidays, my Nan and I biked down to Mission Bay and when we got down there we biked around some more. When we were riding around we saw some interesting cars like a Nissan GTR R35 and you don't find those everywhere, it also sounded cool.

After that we biked around some more, I also got to play at the park and in the sand. We saw a Pizza shop so we decided to buy some Pizza plus a Coke. When they were done making the Pizza we took it a nice sitting area on the grass and we ate the Pizza there. It was disgusting so we threw it away.

Once we were finished putting the rubbish Pizza in the bin I finished my Coke and we made our way back to the Pizza place to get our money back.

After that we went home. On the way there we  saw even more interesting cars and they also sounded cool. I got tired going home because I had to bike up a hill. But it was a fun day except for eating that rubbish Pizza.

Walht: Use the structure of a recount to write about a personal experience.


  1. Kia Ora Room 8 @ Saint Patrick's School.
    I'm Rikki-Lee from Totara 2. You added many descriptive words instead of using boring words, like instead of yuck you used disgusting Ka Pai! We have done something like this as a task in 2016. Make sure to check out my blog .
    From Rikki-Lee

  2. Kai Ora Room 8 my name is Kaleb, I am a year 7 student at Grey Main school in Greymouth.

    This is a really cool story, I like they way that you have told us cool things like how you got pizza and coke as well.

    This reminds me of when I went for I bike ride with my Granny and my brothers and Mum.

    Kai Pai, From Kaleb

  3. hello there my name is Malachi and I come from saint piusx catholic school i like the way you set out your writing keep up the good work