L.I. - I am learning to use the structure of a narrative to write and entertain my reader audience.
Once upon a time, there was a fairy village, where many fairies lived, there's pretty and loving girl named Blossom, she is the princess of the fairies and King Bob and Queen Bella are very happy for her but they are hiding a big secret to her and they still never told her since she’s a baby.
But one day something bad happened, King Rat, the king of evil rats and mice kidnapped Blossom and trapped her in a tower in the middle of the cursed forest, the forest is cursed and only rats and mice can go in and the tower is very tall with no stairs but there’s a very small window at the top of the tower that no one can reach it or go in.
The King ordered to his guards to save Blossom but the guards came back injured and there was no use to save her because the evil rats and mice are very strong and can't be beaten.
Next the guards said to the King that it's possible that the princess was killed by King Rat and his evil army but the King and Queen didn't believe them.
Meanwhile at the top of the tower, Blossom is crying at the corner and then a small rat entered carrying a food in a tray but Blossom don't want to eat, all she want to do is go home to her fairy friends and her family.
Then something strange happened, someone had entered the tower, it's a fairy and it really look like Blossom when the stranger enters the room where Blossom is staying and when Blossom noticed the stranger she was puzzled, then the stranger grabbed Blossom's hand and waved her wand and the small window became wide and the flew off and go back to the village.
When the stranger and Blossom reached the village, the fairies is shock even the King and Queen are shocked to find their daughter alive and fine but the King and Queen are more shocked to see that the stranger is their long lost daughter and the long lost sister of Blossom, the name of the girl is Belle, they all cried and hugged each other.
The King, Queen and the fairies planned to defeat King Rat and his evil army, then the next day they are all ready to defeat King Rat but Blossom will stay at the castle because she not powerful enough to fight them so she stayed with her friends and her mother, then the King and the fairies came back, they were happy to defeat King Rat.
The Royal family of fairies celebrated a feast for the coming back of the long lost princess, and then the King, Queen, Belle and Blossom lived happily ever after.
Great narrative Hillary.
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