Brainstorm
People - Oliver - Richard
Where Panmure rugby pitch
Bike Ride.
One day my cousin and I went on a bike ride down to the playground. It took a little while for me
because I didn't have any gears but my cousin did. Once we got there I was all hot and sticky because
of having my helmet on, and the sweltering heat didn't help much either.
because I didn't have any gears but my cousin did. Once we got there I was all hot and sticky because
of having my helmet on, and the sweltering heat didn't help much either.
When we got there me and Richard looked at each other and then we gunned it down to the swings
(our favourite part of a playground). It was so much fun I love the momentum of swings and also the
soft cool air rushing past your face.
(our favourite part of a playground). It was so much fun I love the momentum of swings and also the
soft cool air rushing past your face.
We then made it back to our bikes and decided to go all the way around the rugby pitch but by
the time we got half way we were both panting and exhausted so we stopped at a water fountain
to get a drink and then decided to go back home. On the way back a bird poop landed on my hand.
I was horrified and Richard and I had a good laugh before our bike ride ended.
the time we got half way we were both panting and exhausted so we stopped at a water fountain
to get a drink and then decided to go back home. On the way back a bird poop landed on my hand.
I was horrified and Richard and I had a good laugh before our bike ride ended.
Ola Room 8!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Katelynn and I am a year 7 at Grey Main School in Greymouth.
It sounds like you and Richard had a great time on your bike ride. I love how you have used lots of different descriptive words in your recount.
What was your favourite part of the bike ride with Richard?
Did you enjoy your bike ride all together?
What was your favourite part of your bike ride?
How many kilometres was your bike ride?
I like how you have posted your recount to your blog!
What other pieces of writing have you done in Room 8?
He Whetu Koe! (Your a star!)
Katelynn