WALHT - use the structure of a narrative to entertain an audience
Raised by a strong bird, Brownie was worried with his new founded ‘creature’. Born without wings, claws or sharp canine teeth, this large child was doubted to survive the harsh economy around her. The individual bird worked laborious for the forest child. Fasting parts of her daily meals, the bird was roughly skin and bones before it had collapsed unconscious back in its home.
With the child gaining encouragement from its momentarily half-dead mother bird. With it having the same diet; crunchy nutrient-filled leaves, herbs and fruit, the child scurried off to scavenge off of other animal’s treasure in its holey trunks. Swinging from branch to branch, the child had been provided with many ripe and mature fruit. Foul’s experience was extraordinarily unaccountable. Alas, poor Foul with its founded mother all bone and feathers.
Filled with pity and grief, Foul had much sympathy for its rotted stepmother. She was merely a decent child decent who desired something to take care of. Ever since that tragic depression, Foul, born as a herbivore, had no intention to kill animals for food or accessories of trophy.
It had been 16 years ever since his mother’s death. Who knows what Foul is up to now? Dead or alive, he had a clean and pure soul. Charles Darling though, is still up to date and still selling animal hides, meat and head trophies.
Intriguing narrative
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