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Monday, 13 October 2014

Children should be allowed to drive a car?


In this essay I will prove and explain why children should and should not drive any vehicles. Down below are three paragraphs explaining why children should be allowed to drive any vehicles.


The child wouldn't want to be in the same car with their family. His/Her family is going for a trip but then he/she would be annoyed because of his/her family. For example. Baby sister could vomit all over the car, than you would feel disgusted.


Children can learn to shoot and drive in a young age to defend themselves. Some children already know how to shoot because of Lazer -tag and paint ball, so that is 50% good. They could combined driving and shooting. This might sound bazaar. But if boys or girls go into the special force they could catch an enemy in a different vehicle. It is best to defend yourself while driving.


Imagine an invasion? You could escape faster while driving than walking. Imagine if aliens or other people are taking over your country, you can drive away than walking away. If you had a decision to escape would you run? Or drive?


The next three paragraphs will include ‘Why children should not be allowed to drive any vehicles’.  


It is a bad thing for children to drive cars because  they could get arrested by the police. The child driving could do something stupid and get caught by the police, for example going on a red light. It is for the best that children should not be able to drive because they could go to jail.


Some children don’t have enough muscle to turn the steering wheel. In some areas you have to make a full turn. I don’t think children can control the force of the wheel because most of the time the wheel will go out of control. Children aren't grown up yet... to drive any vehicles.


Driving a car is cool...but it might become to cool. Children could get violent while driving a vehicle and run people over. For example. A child could see his enemy and run him or her over. We need to keep away children from driving so they wouldn't commit any harm or damage to anyone.


This piece of writing concludes my essay. I have explained and discussed the reasons why children should and should not drive any vehicles. I do not confirm children to be driving any advanced vehicles because they will commit harm to human beings and to themselves. Plus they would be the one to be blame for murder in a very young age.

Marshmallow Challenge

Today In maths Mrs Dines gave us an activity called the Marshmallow challenge. The aim of the challenge was to create a long and stable tower using 20 spaghetti sticks, 1 1m length string, 1 marshmallow, 1 1m masking tape and a pair of scissors in only 18 mins. You have to use the materials given and not found objects and when you're done you have to stick the marshmallow in top. Mrs Dines put us in our kidpreneur groups for the challenge. She then gave us 3 mins to discuss and plan.

5,4,3,2,1. The 3 mins were over and Mrs Dines quickly started the countdown.We pushed our chairs out of the way, grabbed the sticks and the tape and stuck them together. We made three long sticks and attached them to form a triangle. When we were done Agnes carefully stuck the marshmallow on top but sadly it fell. We looked around and saw the other teams thinking first. We then realised we were rushing. We took the sticks apart and started again.

When We took the sticks apart Agnes and Dehnyse came up with the idea to make a pyramid shape to support the three sticks making the triangle. As the 18 min went down to nearly 7 min I grabbed the tape carelessly, ripped it and stuck it to the sides to keep it strong. It was going to the last minute. Agnes told me to hold the top so she could use the string to tie the top. Kolio,Agnes,Dehnyse and I stepped away from the tower and it was STANDING!

Agnes and Dehnyse were shouting and shaking hands so were me and Kolio But we were celebrating too soon. Somehow the sound waves created by our celebrating caused the tower to collapse. All the other teams laughed and carried on. The time finished and everyone stepped away from the tower. Mrs dines Then came around measured just two teams towers because the other groups towers fell.

In the end Johns team won.Although only the winners got marshmallow Mrs Dines was kind to give us some too.  

Sunday, 12 October 2014

Marshmallow challenge


My recount is about Marshmallow Challenge
we was work as group and we also discussion
about how do we  what and how we going  to do
our Marshmallow Challenge do we have to finish our
spaghetti or tape or string and when we do the
marshmallow challenge we do and think what things
a going to finish first and then we finish our tape and after
we didn’t finish our spaghetti.

After that we make our marshmallow tall and but
we didn’t make our spaghetti at the top we put our
marshmallow at the top because we not allowed to
use our desk or hand to it and we not allowed to put
marshmallow down the bottom we have to put at the
top and also we do it like a wire that bowl that I look
about our marshmallow challenge.

When we live our marshmallow it was stand after we
move backfired and Vine was landed on desk so the
desk shake because it was Vine fault so after the time was  
nearly finish so have no idea how we going to do our
marshmallow challenge because we finish our tape so we
use the string so the marshmallow stand up straight again
and we told Vine to move back that the desk don’t shaking
again.

So we all move back that the desk don’t shake again so
that our marshmallow not fallen down again because we
don’t have time again to fix our marshmallow challenge
and when the time finish our marshmallow didn’t fallen
down and when our teacher come and check our marshmallow
challenge it was 51 high so we a second winner.

The marshmallow challenge we was like really cool
because we like working with a group that the end

of marshmallow challenge.

The rain and hail.

“Goodnight everyone”, I said as I made my way to bed. It was raining really hard and there was hail. The hailstones were pattering against our window and it made it hard to get to sleep. I thought I’d skip through channels on T.V and see what was on. After about half an hour, I finally drifted off to sleep.

I awoke with a start because I could feel wet drips on my head. There was pitch black around me and it was cold. As I hopped off the uncomfortable mattress, I could see nothing but I managed to escape the empty room without falling. I carefully went down the stairs. There were leaks in the roof and it was raining really hard. There was something weird about the rain but I couldn't quite figure it out. Maybe that was the reason no one was around. I was outside and it was dark, but I quickly went into the big apartment because it was pouring down. I felt dizzy, a hailstone must have knocked me unconscious. I could just see a figure of ice the size of a tennis ball.

I woke up in a much more different place. This place was a bit cosier, with a fireplace and more light. I could still hear the pattering of raindrops outside. ‘Why was it always raining’, I thought to myself. There was still no sign of anyone and I wondered why I was here. There was dripping in the bathroom. At first I was scared but then I just remembered that it was raining. I went to the door and finally saw a light, it must have been a car. The light got really bright, my eyes felt like they were burning. Suddenly, it all stopped and I woke up.

It was all a dream. It was pouring with rain outside and my head was a little sore. I must have hit it on the wall, maybe that was why a big hailstone had knocked me unconscious in my dream. And my sister had turned the light on and it was shining bright on my face. It was time to get read for school ‘What a dream’, I thought to myself. It felt real and everything that had happened in real life was put into a dream. Hmm weird!

Thursday, 9 October 2014

Today during our Kidprenuer class, we made an prototype to improve our product. We added beads and letters on our rings. We also started a survey to make our product even better on survey monkey. the prototype had to be made of high quality materials and an simple design.

Tuesday, 7 October 2014

Marshmallow Challenge

In this essay I will explain why children should and should not wear school uniforms. There are three reasons for and against the proposition.

They could represent their school. If children wear school uniforms that means that they are proud to go to that school. An example for this is that if children wear school uniforms that means that they are proud of what school they come from and they don’t care if other schools don’t have any uniform. This is a great idea because children wouldn’t worry about getting up in the morning and looking for clothes like other schools do.

If children go on school trips they’ll get lost if they don’t have a uniform. Children can get lost if they wear different clothes but if you wear uniform you won’t get  lost because the teacher know’s who you are and which school you go to. For example, Sarah went for a school trip and she got lost, she was very lucky because her teacher found her straight away just by looking at her uniform. Perfect idea because you don’t have to cry when you get lost you can just go find your teacher or the teacher could just come and find you.  

In the next three paragraphs I will explain why children should not be allowed to wear uniforms.

Uniforms are just ugly. If you're walking in your school uniform you might see some people wearing different clothes and you might want to wear different clothes to school as well. The example is that if your just walking and you see other people wearing better and different clothes from you, they're just making you jealous. This is a horrible idea because you will feel bad.

Your mum will have to wash your clothes everyday. Say you came back from school took off your clothes and threw them in the dirty clothes pile. Your mum will have to spend hours washing,drying and folding them. A brilliant example is that if you just came back from school and you threw your clothes in the dirty pile your mum will get no free time if you just keep wearing different clothes every single day. This is a no,no because you're just going to have no time with your mum because she’s too busy washing your clothes.

This concludes my essay.  I have discussed the reasons why children should and should not wear school uniform. I do not believe children should wear school uniform because it just makes them look like a fool.



Children should have to wear a school uniform

In this essay I will explain why children should and should not wear school uniforms. There are three reasons for and against the proposition.

They could represent their school. If children wear school uniforms that means that they are proud to go to that school. An example for this is that if children wear school uniforms that means that they are proud of what school they come from and they don’t care if other schools don’t have any uniform. This is a great idea because children wouldn’t worry about getting up in the morning and looking for clothes like other schools do.

If children go on school trips they’ll get lost if they don’t have a uniform. Children can get lost if they wear different clothes but if you wear uniform you won’t get  lost because the teacher know’s who you are and which school you go to. For example, Sarah went for a school trip and she got lost, she was very lucky because her teacher found her straight away just by looking at her uniform. Perfect idea because you don’t have to cry when you get lost you can just go find your teacher or the teacher could just come and find you.  

In the next three paragraphs I will explain why children should not be allowed to wear uniforms.

Uniforms are just ugly. If you're walking in your school uniform you might see some people wearing different clothes and you might want to wear different clothes to school as well. The example is that if your just walking and you see other people wearing better and different clothes from you, they're just making you jealous. This is a horrible idea because you will feel bad.

Your mum will have to wash your clothes everyday. Say you came back from school took off your clothes and threw them in the dirty clothes pile. Your mum will have to spend hours washing,drying and folding them. A brilliant example is that if you just came back from school and you threw your clothes in the dirty pile your mum will get no free time if you just keep wearing different clothes every single day. This is a no,no because you're just going to have no time with your mum because she’s too busy washing your clothes.

This concludes my essay.  I have discussed the reasons why children should and should not wear school uniform. I do not believe children should wear school uniform because it just makes them look like a fool.